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I Broke

I broke last night.
I couldn't fight
the pain inside
and I lost my pride.

I fell into tears,
giving way to my fears.
Wondering if he'd stay
or if today was the day

when things went from bad
to worse; to make me sad.
I began to lose hope
and through pain couldn't cope.

Everyone thinks I'm being a goof,
but pain comes along and *poof*.
Down came my wall
as I began to fall

into the depths of despair
and there is no hope there.
No longer knowing what to do,
I prayed that it was true,

that God's promise will reign
and there will be an end to this pain,
that things will be alright
even in the night.
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ForestFireFlies Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Photographer
Honey, i see that this bothers u. Its frustrating, isnt it? But remember that the bible talks about laying downbour pride, right? Its okay to put your wall down. You r a beautiful person when u r real and kind and loving. THOSE are important things. Do u feel afraid not having a wall up? Is this what u fear?
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ElectricWeasle Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I do like having a wall up. Makes it easier not to get hurt.
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ForestFireFlies Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Photographer
yes, that seems like it doesnt it? I think a wall can be both helpful & hurtful. It may feel safe right? But too long & it can become like a prison, true?
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ElectricWeasle Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah...cause people begin to expect you to always be okay cause you put on a show. So when you're not okay...well. yeah.
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ForestFireFlies Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Photographer
I sure do understand. We all have our struggles. we all have fears and worries. We are not perfect only Jesus was. But every single day we can try to be & do better, right? It is a daily walk we must walk with Christ. Not a perfect walk but a walk. :-). Youre worth it because God made you! :-D
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ElectricWeasle Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :)
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ForestFireFlies Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Photographer
Aww, u r so modest too ^^. YW
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ElectricWeasle Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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ForestFireFlies Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Photographer
Awww sure ^^ hu *hugs u*
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