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First of all, this poem has nothing to do with me. It is not a personal poem whereas most of mine are. And, although I can't enable critiques on here, I would appreciate them in comments if you would. And Writers--Club, would you be so kind as to critique this?

There are so many stories of teen suicides, bullying, cutting, eating disorders, and nasty rumors that just tear people apart. It's time people knock it off and start treating others the way that they want to be treated. As a Christian, I believe that God calls us to treat people the way we want to be treated, but you can be an atheist and still know that you had better treat people right. 

The saying "sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me" is a LIE. Words hurt. Words can push someone to the edge. Words can knock them down. Words have the power to start a fire and kill. So be careful of what you're saying and if someone is in need, stand up for them because they might not have any one else there. 

Yep. That's all.

God bless, guys. 
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That was beautifully done. Words do hurt and it has been scientifically proven that emotional pain has severe and VISIBLE affects on the human body. Thank you for putting you work out here.
  Stay strong,
    - Iceland.